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Heloisa Moura's avatar

Beautiful!

Urvasi Devi Dasi's avatar

Aham, this feels very still… almost like standing beside a quiet river and noticing something beneath the surface that doesn’t move with the current.

That image of the thread remaining while everything else opens, closes, passes; it carries a kind of calm gravity. Time, bodies, pain… all moving through their cycles, while something subtle and steady simply is. I especially loved the line “Speech breaks near it.” Some things really do sit beyond explanation; the closer language gets, the more it falters.

Reading it, I couldn’t help feeling that the thread is pointing to that quiet continuity running through life. The subtle connection we’re always held by, even when everything else seems to shift or disappear. Not something to grasp, exactly… more something we slowly realise we were never outside of.

It’s a very spare poem, but it leaves a long echo. One of those pieces that keeps unfolding a little after you’ve finished reading it. Thank you for sharing 🙏🏽

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